Tireless, they work, they craft,
Build structures high, plan and draft,
For future's sake, for generetions new,
They all call out, we all need you.
But take a break, rest your head,
Madness comes for the ill-prepared,
Who sold their soul to fill the role,
Work day and night, and you will fall.
So sleep, my friend, and don't forget,
Always you'll make choices to regret,
But live life sweet, like chocolate cream,
Breathe, my friend, and always dream.
ooooh I love this! just a few structure/grammar mistakes here and there but can be fixed with the edit button. the second verse has to be my fav with the whole 'madness comes for the ill-prepared' But the last line is my fav line!😍It flows so well - i kind of want it on a mug or t-shirt now.... 🤔😁
Thank you for the comment! Yeah, I copied and pasted it out of my notes, and the formatting was a bit off on my phone, hopefully all fixed now. Im happy to hear you liked it, I have a fair few poems that I may post in the future.